*has stopped procrastinating about getting this completely finished and posted*
Now, after a couple of hours of listening to various styles of metal songs in a new light with my new headpuffs (yes, there is a reason for ‘headpuffs’ and not ‘headphones’ . . .) which have the proper bass levels for me to listen to songs that have killed both my iPod earphones and several other brands that I have tried, I have completed my anaylsis of “Thoughts From Within” by Woody Harrelson.
Some of you may remember Woody Harrelson from the TV show ‘Cheers‘ (I know the show since I watched Ted Danson’s later show, ‘Becker’, until it slowly dwindled from two episodes every weekday, to one, then to no episodes ever) and he now has the website VoiceYourself and has written the poem in response to the global crisis.
However, I would like to begin the actual analysis instead of rambling on about things that aren’t really all that neccesary to the main point of this post. Just as a note, I prefer poetry with symbolism and words and phrases that make you think and contemplate what the author could be saying and this poem was just to a little bit realistic and saying what they wanted to state quite obviously with a bit of imagery/metaphors/similies thrown in there for the sake of it — but that’s just my opinion.
Beginning with the first stanza, the first thing that I notice is the fact that the lines “I sometimes feel like an alien creature/for which there is no earthly explanation” seem quite . . . undeveloped and rather bland as a way of setting out an opening idea. There could be so much more done with those two lines that could make it a more gripping and inspiring start rather than one that makes you think that someone had just written what first came to mind and then refused to change it. To accompany these lines, the opening lines of the second stanza, “I feel like a run-on sentence/in a punctuation crazy world” are also able to be made much more inspiring with more editing and the creative use of both the english language and a thesaurus.
In the third stanza, the first thing that jumps out at me is — rather ironically — at the end of the stanza: “like a genetically modified irradited Big Mac/is somehow symbolic of food”. One thing that has always been annoying to me is the fact that ALL food is genetically modified but not in the labatory, yet only food whose DNA has been changed in a labatory is regarded as “genetically modified” and *evil*. Ever since the breakthrough which led humans to begin using farms to create their own food instead of hunting and gathering and migrating, the human race has decided where to grow its food and most of the time they choose the richest and most fertile spot. Doesn’t that change that plant’s genetics from one that has grown naturally where it was supposed to?
Similarly, as farming progressed and crop rotation was introduced, doesn’t that change the DNA from the crops that were just grown repeatedly in the same area? And the introduction of both fertilizers and pestdicides — that changes the DNA so that the plants both flourish in their growth and loose the abiltity to resist the insects that the pestdicides kill. After all that, over a long period of time, editing crops in a labatory is just doing what we have been doing all this time but sped up. And even organic plants, that are grown without fertilizer and pesticides, are still growing in the most fertile and promising land areas to make them the best on the market.
Doubling backwards to have a look at the rest of the stanza, I must stop to ask whether “pc’s” should be written that way instead of “PCs”. Somehow, that just really annoys me — it must be the punctuation/formatting obsession coming out. The line “‘In Money We Trust‘” in the next line brings me to my next point in the next stanza, which needs to be posted in it’s entirety for the analysis to be easiest to understand (I apologize for using the lyrics form of formatting for posting the poetry, but the double-spaced spacing between every hit of the enter key really annoys me): “Morality is legislated/prisons over-populated [is that dash supposed to be there? /supresses inner editor]/religion is incorporated/the profit-motive has permeated all activity/we pay our government to let us park on the street.“
At this point, my thoughts are all directed to the idea that this poem is pointing the finger at the government for all our mistakes and problems, and somehow suggesting that religion has managed to seep into supposedly secular leadership. And I begin to wonder, if morality is legislated, does it exist at all, or is it just a governmental policy that we all seem to be obsessed with following? And if that is true, if the prisons are overpopulated, then are they victims of justice, injustice, corruption, ethics, or their own mistakes?
Continuing on, in the next stanza the line that pops out immediately is “we all know missile envy only comes from being small”. I personally think that Harrelson, in this line, is attempting to imply that the larger countries with enough power and money to be able to use weapons such as missiles (and what they represent, such as the power and the resources to wage war when the government decides that it is the only way forward, though they are not always right) in some distant way provoke the smaller countries into their anger and resent for the larger countries and create more violence in the world.
And (I have a feeling that I may be going too fast through the poem) moving on to the next stanza, the last four lines seem the most important. “And blaming the President for the country’s woes/is like yelling at a puppet/for the way it sings/who’s the man behind the curtain pulling the strings?” really seem to speak two messages both contradicting and in accordance with the previous stanza. The entire previous stanza was basically bringing all the faults of the government to the forefront and now he is defending the president, comparing him to a puppet in the government’s hands. Though really, is anything in the government really ever just one person’s fault (due to the system of checks and balances)? It’s something to think about, at least . . .
And just as a little point that annoyed me a little was that the fact at the beginning of the next stanza the line is “a billion people sitting watching their TV”. The author himself was on televison and starred in a show. He cannot be that bothered about people watching television when he relies on viewers to make his money (or did, anyway, I’m not sure whether he has done any recent work or not). And they may be watching DVDs of the series — it all puts money in his pocket. It just seems fairly hypocritical to me.
The lines “dreaming of the way things used to be/Pre-Industrial revolution” just seem to be both irrelevant and vaguely idiotic. First of all, we cannot go back to before the Industrial Revolution, not only because the economy would probably collapse and how hard it would be to completely elimininate anything that occured as a byproduct of the revolution, but life during that time wasn’t all happy and go lucky either. There were still problems, there was still death, there was still murder, there was still war, there were still terrible things happening. Nothing in that time was remarkably better than what it is today — if anything, it was worse.
One of the last things that I’ll be touching on are the lines ”like Monsanto and Dupont had their way/as they continue to today“. If the companies were just shut down one day, and nothing was produced from them and there were no food in the stores, what would you do? Not everyone has access to either the land to sit down and farm or the resources to do so or buy other people’s surplus of their harvest. These companies cannot just vanish. There has to be planning, and change, but if they just shut down one day, then we would just not be able to function for at least a fortnight. Probably even longer, actually.
Finally, I’m just going to look at two last lines in the last stanza of the poem: “are you going to make the rich man richer/or are you going to stand your ground” Again, this annoys me because the poem is basically, in one simple sentence, blaming the rich for the global issues at hand when everyone is to blame, not just the rich.
Overall, it’s a well-written poem (most of the time) and it’s quite nice when it’s read, but it’s message jumps around too much for me to really appreciate the writing and overlook the patchy meaning. In class, we brought up the question asking whether this poem was hopeful or hopeless, and I choose to believe that it is neither: the poem is, in short, quite noncommital.
. . . and I’m going to leave it at that. =D